Sunday, October 26, 2014

Poem


The following poem was written by Brian McLaughlin, and more of his work can be found at his website -- Beej's Poetry Corner.

The Breaking Down of the Wall

The wall had been built
strong and sturdy it was
it kept the state 
from dictating religion

It's purpose to insure
that all men, women too
could believe, or not
worship, or not
in short to have their own faith
and that all may be treated as equals

It was built 
to stop the witch burnings
to end the persecution of the baptists
to bestow upon all men, women too
the freedom to have their own faith

The differences were many
folks seemed to get stupid
thinking

“There's only one way
and that's mine”

“Laws should be made to
give me advantage”

“After all
can't you see God is mine”

They picked up the sledge
started hammering away at the wall
attempting to mold it, shape it, yes change it
and with all this pounding it started to fall

They were claiming the first
and yes they've that right
what they forgot
was the first was for all
they had picked the wrong fight

Then the fourteenth was born
to bolster the wall
build it back up
to insure to all
their rights be protected
but that wasn't enough
the hammering continued
and the state said

“ENOUGH”

“All have these rights
and you've no right 
to deny them”

You claim you're non-profit
you've been given the freedom 
to worship and believe as you wish
and in your church build your kingdom

But if you're licensed as business
I know this sounds hollow
but you've really no choice 
it's the laws of the land you must follow

You've been given protection
and what did you do
started tearing it down
tell me

Who's encroached upon who?

5 comments:

  1. Oh dear, Brian! Only 'E' for effort, I'm afraid. Er, have you ever considered scansion and rhyming?

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  2. Your views on art seem to be as silly as your views on economics and politics, David.

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  3. oh david dear david, for you a limerick. the kind of poetry you may understand.

    There was an old Brit name was duff
    Who's demeanor was really quite gruff
    Always ignoring the contents
    When making his comments
    Like a big bad wolf he'd huff and puff

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  4. Still no proper scansion but I will raise you to 'D' for some slight wit!

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